A brawl between the servants of the feuding households prompts the Prince to threaten both sides to keep the peace on pain of death. Concealing their identities behind masks, Romeo and Benvolio go to the ball, where Romeo and Juliet fall in love at first sight, but at the end of the evening discover their identities as members of the opposed families. On his way home from the feast, Romeo climbs into Capulet's orchard to glimpse Juliet again. Juliet appears at her balcony, and the couple exchange vows of love, agreeing to marry the next day.
While the dialogue is where the writer opens up and can explode with creativity, the scene description is where economy of language is most important. This can be almost as difficult as dialogue. Scene Description sets up what the characters are doing physically, and how they interact with each other and their physical surroundings.
Because the reader is trying to imagine the film the writer is telling, scene description should be lucid in description without being too detailed. Details tend to slow the reader, breaking the fluidity of the imagination. The Scene Description should scan easily.
This is accomplished by cutting the longer passages of description into blocks of not more than four to six lines. Action sequences which often last a page or more should never fill the page.
The break of a blank white line every four to six lines makes it easier for the reader to keep their place while scanning a line.
Again, your concern is to keep them in the vision of the scene. If it is not absolutely essential, don't put it in. The color of the walls in the lobby of a hospital is not important. It may be important if there is a Diego Rivera mural of oppressed people being pulled from war rubble.
Each time a new character comes into the screenplay, give their name in full capitals. Do this only once per character in the screenplay. Capitals in Scene Description should be minimal. You need not worry about this. Again, capitalization takes away from the readers fluid enjoyment.
The rare case where you might want to capitalize a word is when you need impact. You might want accent the SLAM of the door which makes the character leap for fear. You also might like to capitalize the first time the FOGHORN blares and the shipwrecked lifeboat sailors know the are near another ship.
But don't overuse this. The biggest problem with writing Scene Description is to keep it simple, to use a style which creates a visual image in your reader's mind. The convention of a novel allows the writer to spend a great deal of time describing the emotional life of characters. This is not accepted in the screenplay.
The emotional life of the characters is implied in their dialogue and in the conceptual structure of the story. What is important is how the story and the characters interact. And avoid long pages of description that are not action sequences.
Nothing bores a reader more than a beautiful montage which has been rendered and detailed with grueling and meaningfully symbolic and poetic descriptions of images which should provoke enormous and significant philosophical and emotional transformations in the audience.
There is nothing wrong with a meaningful and symbolic montage sequence. In fact, there is not enough of them in film.
Just don't make them boring to read. They want to see what the audience would see at the theater, not what the crew and the extras see making a movie. Here is a Scene Description: He sits back, stretching his pained back, and slugs down a shot of the gin.
He looks up and around. The shadow seems reluctant to enter then forces the door open. We don't see her face until the door opens enough to let the desk lamp light it. That does describe the scene and makes certain that the filmmakers know what they should do with it. But then you might have written: The light in the hall backlights the reversed name on the door glass: He surveys his sordid office, stopping his gaze on the door at the sound of high heels approaching.In this tutorial you will learn how to create an Alice in Wonderland themed tea party scene.
Many of you may have heard of the little girl falling down a rabbit hole into a world full of adventures. There was a tea party—an odd, bizarre, ridiculous, and eccentric tea party. For me, it was the most. (CAPULET and his COUSIN sit down) How long is it now since you and I last wore masks at a party like this?
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I'm writing a party scene for the end, but I'm wondering what is the best way to write one? One of the band members, Harry Styles, was looking to escape the party scene. The teen idol asked if he could hide out in Winston’s attic for a couple of weeks. Write the first draft of your story in as short a time as possible.
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